This is the kind of fame that nobody wants, but highlighting the email marketing slips and gaffes by some of the world’s largest online retailers drives home the importance of being careful with your brand in a medium that’s lightning fast. This year’s inductees should be cautionary tales for everyone in the industry, who will hopefully avoid these kinds of errors in 2007.
Perhaps not unsurprisingly, a great many errors occurred in subject lines. Clearly some of these subject lines were left until last, and sometimes they were never gotten to:
HP, 10/9 — TBDOverstock, 10/11 — XXFIRST_NAMEXX, shop our CLEARANCE EVENTInterestingly, Overstock didn’t require or even request my name when I signed up for their newsletter.
Nordstrom, 10/5 — Winter's Best New Coats Free Shipping (Details Inside)Winter's Best New Coats Free Shipping (Details Inside)Orvis, 11/22 — Free Ship. Ends Nov 26. Must Act Now.
Home Depot, 7/27, 4 pm — Relax and Entertain – No Shipping Charges on All Patio FurniturePresumably this is an en-dash or em-dash that didn’t make it through Home Depot's email system.
Lands’ End, 11/10 — Turtlenecks with Outerwear HQ bannerI really liked this mistake because they appeared to have a system in place to minimize the damage should a non-final subject line slip through. This is clearly a production subject line that describes the content of the email: a turtleneck promotion on top, followed by a banner promoting its Outerwear HQ. While not as good as the final polished subject line would have been, it’s much better than “TBD.” Other retailers should consider following Land’s End’s lead on this, giving their in-production emails names that plainly describe what’s in them. That way, if an email does slip through the cracks with that production subject line, it’s not a total disaster.
Overstock, 12/5 — 12 Days O Christmas - Pirates of the Caribean for $9.99
They misspelled “Caribbean,” but who the heck cares when you’re selling it for $9.99?! Apparently subscribers didn’t give a hoot. Shoppers flooded into Overstock’s site, causing them to list the DVD as “sold out” to alleviate traffic as the site started to sputter under the crush of visitors, according to an
Internet Retailer article.
Bloomingdale’s, 11/8 — Together We Can Make a World of DifferenceA nice campaign, but Bloomingdale’s didn’t capitalize the C in AmeriCares, which made me trip over it when I first read it. Fortunately they styled the name correctly throughout the rest of the email, but that first reference in particular is important. When I was getting my Master’s in Journalism at New York University, I had a professor, former New York Daily News editor Dick Blood, that would fail any assignment that had a proper noun misspelled, even if the rest of it was Pulitzer worthy. That’s just how important it is to get names right.
Circuit City, 12/5 — Circuit City’s live webcast with Rudy Giuliani--don’t miss it!
I actually had to do a little online sleuthing to find out exactly what was missing here. The main message here should have been about former New York City Mayor Rudy Giuliani and New York City Fire Commissioner Nick Scoppetta joining Circuit City in the launch of the “firedog Across America” campaign honoring America’s firefighters, and should have included details about getting the webcast. Instead, they repeated the “nominate your local firehouse” message.
Apple, 11/2 — Apple eNews: November 2, 2006The runarounds on the pictures weren’t done properly. As a result, the pictures obscure the text at the beginning of these two articles.

Apple, 10/5 — Apple eNews: October 5, 2006And in this issue of Apple eNews, you’ll see that the issue date is June 1, 2006, despite the fact that it was delivered on Oct. 5 and clearly intended for that date according to the subject line.
Crutchfield, 11/13 — Bose holiday specials, plus free shippingMissing the apostrophes in “I’m” and “you’ll”:
Hello Electronics Fan,
This week, Im proud to announce the certification of our call centers by J.D. Power and Associates* for providingAn Outstanding Customer Service Experience. This distinction acknowledges the strong commitment by our Sales Advisors, Tech Support Advisors, and Customer Service representatives to providing top-notch service, every step of the way. Give them a call — youll see what I mean.
AllPosters, 7/26 — 30% off - 1 Day Sale - Try Our Professional Framing!Watch those countdowns. After “2 Days Left,” you have “1 Day Left.”
EBGames, 7/25 — EBgames.com Newsletter 7.25.2006Some of the coding is showing in the search button.

And those were just some of the more glaring slip ups. There were several minor typos, misspelling and style inconsistencies as well, but most probably went unnoticed by subscribers.
So, assuming you notice the mistake quickly, or it’s pointed out to you, what do you do? Do you run a correction? In journalism, this is a question that’s asked all the time. My advice as an editor to you is to only correct material mistakes, those that change or skew the understanding of the message. So for instance, I would not have bothered subscribers by resending a
Sept. 26 email from Drugstore.com (Last Chance – get Free Shipping on your next order) after having sent an email without a subject line:

On the other hand, I would have corrected the Circuit City-Giuliani email I mentioned above if given the opportunity because the meaning of the email was severely affected. I also agree with Sharper Image’s decision to follow up on an
Oct. 12 email (Save $20! San Antonio Store Anniversary Special) that they apparently sent to everyone on their mailing list, instead of just the subscribers in the San Antonio area. The next day they sent an email
(Oops! Texas isn’t THAT big! Save $20 anywhere.) that poked a little fun at themselves for the mistake while also making the offer good at all their stores nationwide. It was a nice mea culpa, and the subject line was so good that it made it into my
Subject Line Hall of Fame.
Labels: Apologies, Hall of Fame, Oopsy, Oopsy Hall of Fame, Personalization, Rendering, Subject Lines